Jaymee!! Posted December 10, 2009 Posted December 10, 2009 Gah, I have to make my regular sized entry as well.
GDM Posted December 10, 2009 Posted December 10, 2009 Matteo,Would you be able to send me a file or something with the calender pages so that I can proofread them? I can't really figure out if these are the final products throughout the thread and it's hard to proofread them looking through the files. I don't know if there is another site where the finished months are being kept that I can access?Maybe people can email me their files? What do you think?My email address is elderta@mac.comThanks, Tanya
GDM Posted December 10, 2009 Posted December 10, 2009 Hi guys, I'm going to try and do the proofreading as best as I going back into this thread. Hopefully I have seen all of the final or near to final uploads. Everything I may write are only suggestions, so please feel free to talk back and say no! I have done proofreading for two calendars before, so I hope that I can add to this great calendar that you all have created! And about that T and Th: T stands for Tuesday, Th for Thursday...Ok, rummaging through this thread, here are the months that I could find:January Calendarhttp://i50.tinypic.com/2my21w5.jpgThe hyphens in your date list aren't consistent. For the 1st, 6th and 12th, there is a space between the hyphen and the text, but not for the 17th and 18th. Also, is the F in Freese capitilized or lower case?March Calendar http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3893/calendar1b.pngIt's beautiful, but I can't really read the St. Patrick's Day text. http://i45.tinypic.com/20gdvyc.pngThis one is easier to read, but still tough. But I like it!May Calendarhttp://img694.imageshack.us/img694/984/21cbmike6.jpgNice! July Calendarhttp://img23.imageshack.us/img23/4907/option3july.jpgLooks great!You need consistent spaces between the periods in your date text and the beginning of the text. Sometimes there is a space, and sometimes not, particularly for July 1 and July 2. Also, the slash for the text on July 2 should either be:... was released/16th anniversaryor--- was released / 16th anniversaryRight now it's was released/ 16th anniversaryDecember CalendarAre there two calendars for December? Sorry, I saw two different ones and don't know which one is really the one to proof.One I saw had Hanukkah on December 1, the other on December 2. And one had an h on the end of Hanukkah and one didn't. Hmm. Clarification on which one is the one I should be looking at?Here are the ones I saw:http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9349/2010decembergdw.pnghttp://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/sar...eceber20103.pngThere are so many ways to spell Hanukkah, but maybe you want to put an H at the end as in: Hanukkah. Also, it starts at sundown on the 1st, and while I don't know if you want to add the word sundown, the way it looks now, it seems that it starts on sundown the night before (in this case, November 30). So I don't know if you want to make it for December 2, which people will know that it begins the night before? What do you think? Does that make sense?And should Ramadan be added? Just wondering. And Kwanzaa has two a's.
Michi1 Posted December 10, 2009 Posted December 10, 2009 January Calendarhttp://i50.tinypic.com/2my21w5.jpgThe hyphens in your date list aren't consistent. For the 1st, 6th and 12th, there is a space between the hyphen and the text, but not for the 17th and 18th. Also, is the F in Freese capitilized or lower case?Oh geez, I didn't even notice the inconsistency! Sorry!And the F is uppercase.
GDM Posted December 10, 2009 Posted December 10, 2009 Oh geez, I didn't even notice the inconsistency! Sorry!And the F is uppercase. I think I'm going to make a new thread to put all of these in.Hi guys,I created a new thread for the proofreading stage.You can add your finished ones here, I guess, for the final discussions. I'll find them and add them to the first page here:http://www.greendaycommunity.org/Forum/ind...showtopic=75693How does that sound? Great work, people, looks amazing! It' gonna be a great 2010!Tanya
GDM Posted December 10, 2009 Posted December 10, 2009 Hi there!Still looking for the following drafts:AprilJuneSeptemberOctoberNovember
GDM Posted December 10, 2009 Posted December 10, 2009 Alright, got them here except for November here:http://www.greendaycommunity.org/Forum/ind...=0#entry3453440I have messages for green_tint, michi1 and showbiz in the above link on the last page.How is everyone else coming with their updates? did everyone see the suggestions who had them?
GDM Posted December 13, 2009 Posted December 13, 2009 Hello,Matteo posted the following message in the Proofreading thread:"guys please upload al resolutions by no later than th 15th December please!!The complete file should be uploadedon the same day:)"Please take a look there if you have not done do already for any changes that needed to be made with text. Please let me know if you have made your changes.Deadline is Tuesday, December 15th.Thanks!http://www.greendaycommunity.org/Forum/ind...=75693&st=0
matteo263 Posted December 13, 2009 Author Posted December 13, 2009 Hello,Matteo posted the following message in the Proofreading thread:"guys please upload al resolutions by no later than th 15th December please!!The complete file should be uploadedon the same day:)"Please take a look there if you have not done do already for any changes that needed to be made with text. Please let me know if you have made your changes.Deadline is Tuesday, December 15th.Thanks!http://www.greendaycommunity.org/Forum/ind...=75693&st=0you are doing amazing work!!thanks
Guitar4Girl Posted December 13, 2009 Posted December 13, 2009 Okay I am so confused, who are we sending them too now? Also I'm sure I've already sent matteo263 my finished version and draft?
GDM Posted December 13, 2009 Posted December 13, 2009 Okay I am so confused, who are we sending them too now? Also I'm sure I've already sent matteo263 my finished version and draft?Guitar4Girl,Sorry for any confusion!If you follow the link provided above to the proofreading page, you will see that I was proofreading each of the months starting last week. Your final versions still go to Matteo. I'm just trying to catch any mistakes. Here is what I wrote for October, a beautiful design!October Calendarhttp://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l232/jaz...1024October.jpgLove the design, but I have the same problem as in Violeta's: it looks like you are saying that there are 3 TO 10 years since Warning was released. Hyphens are usually written to give a range of years.Maybe:3rd - 10 years since Warning10th - 15 years since Insomniac was released14th - 13 years since Nimrod was released17th - 23 years since Sweet Children played their first concert at Rod's Hickory PitAlso, it's Rod's Hickory Pit, not Rod Hickory Pit.I believe Violeta is going to change his as well.Best,Tanya
Guitar4Girl Posted December 13, 2009 Posted December 13, 2009 Ok, thanks for making things clear, I'll make sure to correct the mistakes
GDM Posted December 13, 2009 Posted December 13, 2009 Ok, thanks for making things clear, I'll make sure to correct the mistakes
saraHsunshine Posted December 15, 2009 Posted December 15, 2009 putting these here as well...widescreennot widescreen lolI will not be offended if this one is discarded in favor of the other December one...
matteo263 Posted December 15, 2009 Author Posted December 15, 2009 Many still have not uploaded their wallpaper!!!Please do so because I will have to delay the release!
GDM Posted December 15, 2009 Posted December 15, 2009 Many still have not uploaded their wallpaper!!!Please do so because I will have to delay the release!Matteo, is there a special place for them to upload them, like a URL or a site? Or are they supposed to send them directly to you?
matteo263 Posted December 15, 2009 Author Posted December 15, 2009 Matteo, is there a special place for them to upload them, like a URL or a site? Or are they supposed to send them directly to you?Anything is ok,just upload themand post them on this thread or else PM me.Just make sure I get them!
fainiel Posted December 15, 2009 Posted December 15, 2009 Here's my finished one!WidescreenThe other one
Micky Posted December 15, 2009 Posted December 15, 2009 I posted my wallpapers in the other thread, but anyway here they are:1920x12001280x1024
matteo263 Posted December 15, 2009 Author Posted December 15, 2009 I still needwide-september regular-june august septemberif those who uploaded the wide do not upload the regular I will need to change the res myself sorry.
Nele Posted December 15, 2009 Posted December 15, 2009 I still needwide-september regular-june august septemberif those who uploaded the wide do not upload the regular I will need to change the res myself sorry.Don't change it yourself if you don't have the psd. file, their faces will look weird. it's not even january yet so we don't need to panic. Here's my entry one more time: wide screen: http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/3383/wa...erbilliejoe.pngstandart screen: http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/3886/wa...liejoesmall.png
showbiz Posted December 16, 2009 Posted December 16, 2009 December (The Full Band):Normal - 1280x1024Widescreen - 1920x1200
matteo263 Posted December 16, 2009 Author Posted December 16, 2009 The release date had to be changed to the 20thsorry
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