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Third verse for "Time of Your Life."


FPerron

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It's always been your choice what voices you will hear.

So take or leave these words I offer in good cheer.

Travel down the twisty path where only you can go.

Put my heart among the things you carry as you grow.

its something unpredictable...etc.

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I like to think the song would take a darker turn if it went longer....

Something really snarling and mean with a ton of obscenity and the actual words "good riddance".  

 

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2 hours ago, FPerron said:

I always thought the song needed another verse, so I wrote one.

Probably would have been a good idea to add this sentence to your OP 

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