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Falling

MarriedtoMikeDirnt

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Alrighty, now I'll give you a song that I wrote. It's called Falling. Critique it, suggest edits, etc. 

 

[Verse 1]

Tell me

Do you think of me

Am I the one you want 

The one you love

 

Baby

Do you need me

Cause I'm desperate for ya

And it hurts like hell

 

Oh shoot 

Why'd I fall for you

It's a downward spiral

It's all downhill

 

[Chorus 1]

Maybe I'm too young

Maybe I'm too dumb, oh yes

I'm falling and I can't recover

Falling and I can't recover, no

 

[Verse 2]

How come

You're the only one

All my thoughts, oh baby

Are only of you

 

Honey

You can keep your money

The only price I need, boy

Is your love

 

[Chorus 2: the real one]

Maybe I'm too young

Maybe I'm too dumb, oh yes

I'm falling and I can't recover

Falling and I can't recover

 

Lost in your embrace

Blinded by your pretty face

I'm falling and I can't recover

Falling and I can't recover, no

 

[Bluesy guitar riff]

 

[Chorus 2] x2

 

 

That's pretty much it. I wrote it back in August. It's a cheesy love song, and I'm disgusted by the fact that I wrote that, but I'm very proud of it. It's one of my best works.

 

The next song of mine that I'll show will be MDWAISS (it's not finished, and it's horrible), but you have to guess what the acronym stands for. No hints, and I'll only tell you if you're right or wrong.If nobody gets it, then nobody gets to see it. 

 



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