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Controlling My Feelings For Too Long

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i dream of you

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BetterThanAir

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oh night sky

the moon sparkles in my eye

blanket me to sleep

though my pillow stars may weep

paint drips from my head

as i am dreaming in my bed

it leaks a portrait of you and i

longing to project in the night sky

hoping you could look up and see

that i always dream of you and me

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GenesisJames

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Oh god, I relate to this quite a bit right now. Simple but elegant; nice job. :)

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solongfromthestars

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I like this! Some nice metaphors in there. It communicates a sense of longing to me.

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