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Controlling My Feelings For Too Long

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BetterThanAir

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god sent

a spirit

from heaven to me

he said, "child, do not flee"

i stood cold

my heart raced

at an alarming pace

he told me, "don't be afraid"

he whispered

god loved me

and smiled with glee

i stuttered, "what about my family?"

he laughed and

took my hand

and lifted me off of the land

he said, "your family will understand"

we flew up

to heaven

the spirit and me

i caught a clear view of the sea

i asked the spirit

if he knew that sea

"you floated off there"

to me

i panicked

and i cried

i told him, "don't lie"

he said, "you will have to say goodbye"

in heaven

i asked god

to save my mind from this fog

he said, "child, it won't be too long

"your family,

you'll see them

soon once again

guide them and watch them, my friend"

i listened

and waited

as my heart felt deflated

until i saw my family again

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HungryHungryModels

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Oh my God, I just got a ton of goosebumps. :o That's some powerful writing. Great job. <3

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BetterThanAir

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Oh my God, I just got a ton of goosebumps. :o That's some powerful writing. Great job. <3

Thank you m'dear! :D <3

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very powerful! I'm glad I've been able to see some of your poetry! :)

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BetterThanAir

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very powerful! I'm glad I've been able to see some of your poetry! :)

Thanks Jinx! It's about a girl I went to high school with who had drowned.

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Thanks Jinx! It's about a girl I went to high school with who had drowned.

I'm very sorry to hear that. the sad thing is that sometimes the most beautiful poetry is about the most tragic things.

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