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Controlling My Feelings For Too Long

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BetterThanAir

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through the window

i saw your eyes

i knew you were hurting inside

in the sunlight

i saw your face

i knew you were burning inside

in the backyard

i saw you lay

i knew this wasn't your day

in the office

i saw you try

i knew you were breaking inside

holding your hand

i felt your grasp

i knew you were draining inside

in the darkness

i hear you cry

i know you're dying inside

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Not many people have been posting poetry recently, but this is up to my standards and radiating beauty in its simplicity. :)

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Its great, Mimi! <3 :wub::D

Thank you, Chrissle! <3 :wub::D

Not many people have been posting poetry recently, but this is up to my standards and radiating beauty in its simplicity. :)

Thank you so much, Iva! :) I think I will post another one I wrote.

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