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Hey, you!

MrLund96

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Hey, guys.. got my second song written and ready, it's a song about someone I strongly dislike, as you can probably tell, and though I haven't done a "finished" record, I thought I wanted to share this with you.. it's just like a demo version, but it's only guitars and I just quickly recorded and mixed it.. I haven't done vocals, but y'know.. I've done the guitars and vocals, so I thought I'd share it with you.. Here's the song, any feedback is appreciated :)

https://soundcloud.com/magnus-lund-1/hey-you-guitars-vocal

Lyrics:

Intro x2

Verse 1

Hey, you!

The dirtiest bastard of them all,

How!

Can anyone be as cruel as you?

Pre-chorus 1

And I don't know where to go

So I'm losing my control

Chorus 1

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do

Chorus 2

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do

Bridge x2

Solo x4

Pre-chorus

And I don't know where to go

So I'm losing my control

Chorus 3

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do

Chorus 4

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do



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