So, I fixed MDWAISS, but then I got writers block. All I need is a second verse, but I can't come up with it.
To make matters worse, I woke up with a lovely little melody in my head. As opposed to quickly writing it down, I decided to eat food (fucking idiot). After I ate, I realized that I totally forgot it.
In short, fml. I'm gonna go slam my head against a wall until I remember that damned melody.
Harken ye, inspiration has struck!
I can now fix my song MDWAISS, but it's gonna be... blue.
And it's gonna look super weird written down.
But it's gonna be the best damn song I've ever written (and the most embarrassing, but not in a bad way).
Alrighty, now I'll give you a song that I wrote. It's called Falling. Critique it, suggest edits, etc.
Do you think of me
Am I the one you want
The one you love
Do you need me
Cause I'm desperate for ya
And it hurts like hell
Why'd I fall for you
It's a downward spiral
It's all downhill
Maybe I'm too young
Maybe I'm too dumb, oh yes