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This is a blog where I'll post my songs or poems or whatever I come up with :)

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Okay, so most everyone knows what it's like getting dumped. You see, each time this happens to me, I just give up. So one time I thought, "Why is this? Why don't I fight? Why do I just give up like there is no hope left?" I decided to do something about it instead of just giving up. So I wrote this song called "Don't Give Up On Me" to fight for what I had. This song is written before getting dumped - explaining why it's written as trying to hold onto what you have instead of trying to get it back.

There's a link in the bottom of the entry with an acoustic demo recording of the song, which I quickly did one night. I know my singing isn't great, but hopefully you won't all collapse from it :P ... And if you do, don't bloody sue me!

N.B. The lyrics, nor the music, is completely done. Everything is just demos, so I may change in the whole thing some time when I finish it.

Lyrics:

I, like this, am just a mess

I'm ready to fight, ready to confess

For you're the one that I want

You're my true depressant

We can give in if that's what you will

But I will keep on fighting still

Please stay strong, please go on

Dearly beloved - don't give up on me

We can get through it by sticking together

As long as we love one-another

You're the one I'm dreaming of at night

You and I are still in sight

We can give in if that's what you will

But I will keep on fighting still

Please stay strong, please go on

Dearly beloved

Knew it from day one

You could be the one

But you're in doubt and insecure

Baby, I'm here to stay

I promise my heart won't stray

Come closer to me

I, like this, am just a mess

I'm ready to fight, ready to confess

You're the one I'm dreaming of at night

You and I are still in sight

We can give in if that's what you will

But I will keep on fighting still

Please stay strong, please go on

Dearly beloved

Dearly beloved

Dearly beloved

Dearly beloved - don't give up on me

Link: https://soundcloud.com/magnus-lund-1/dont-give-up-on-me-demo

Enjoy :thumbsup:

Hey, you!

By MrLund96,

Hey, guys.. got my second song written and ready, it's a song about someone I strongly dislike, as you can probably tell, and though I haven't done a "finished" record, I thought I wanted to share this with you.. it's just like a demo version, but it's only guitars and I just quickly recorded and mixed it.. I haven't done vocals, but y'know.. I've done the guitars and vocals, so I thought I'd share it with you.. Here's the song, any feedback is appreciated :)

https://soundcloud.com/magnus-lund-1/hey-you-guitars-vocal

Lyrics:

Intro x2

Verse 1

Hey, you!

The dirtiest bastard of them all,

How!

Can anyone be as cruel as you?

Pre-chorus 1

And I don't know where to go

So I'm losing my control

Chorus 1

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do

Chorus 2

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do

Bridge x2

Solo x4

Pre-chorus

And I don't know where to go

So I'm losing my control

Chorus 3

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do

Chorus 4

My life is a misery

And it's all because of you

You're too much, it's killing me

And I don't know what to do

My first song

By MrLund96,

Hey, guys!

This song is a song which I wrote after being in a bad mood for quite a while.. I couldn't quite figure out what was bugging me, but I just felt down constantly and let it out on my girlfriend, Hannah.. so I guess you could say it's sort of an apology song.. :happy: it's also the first song which I've ever written! Well, finished that is, I tend to only write half a song and then I'm stuck :P But I finished this one, and I thought I'd share it with you GDC people to get some response.. just anything really, I might change the lyrics a bit here and there, but what do you think of this? I hope you like it! :thumbsup:

Verse 1

What have I turned into?

What has this come to?

What is it that is killing me?

It's killing me, now can't you see?

Chorus 1

I can't even recognize myself any more

I don't even know what I stand for

I can't even recognize myself any more

A cure is all I'm asking for

Verse 2

I am confused, yeah, I am used

I used up all that's in me

'Cause I am confused, yeah, I am used

More used than I ever thought I'd be

Chorus 2

I can't even recognize myself any more

I don't even know what I stand for

I can't even recognize myself any more

A cure is all I'm asking for

Bridge

I don't want to hear all your simple lies

I don't want to hear you apologize

It's all my fault, you know it's true

I know my cure, and that is you

Verse 3

What have I turned into?

What has this come to?

What is it that is killing me?

It's killing me, now can't you see?

Chorus 3

I can't even recognize myself any more

I don't even know what I stand for

I can't even recognize myself any more

You are all I'm asking for

Chorus 4

I don't even know who I am any more

But you're the one that I fell for

I need to sort this mental war

I'm sorry, Hannah, I deplore

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