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One Night Stand

Posted by TheJesusOfSuburbiaIsALie , 04 January 2013 · 148 views

One Night Stand
Well, the title is pretty self-explanatory. Umm, this is something new, I've kinda experimented with the topic, comments are most welcome! :)
 
You walk into the bar with a strut
Green eyes, blond hair, so delicious
Wearing a leather jacket, tight shirt
Baby, you know what you want to night
 
It's a carefree action, no strings attached
Just you and me in a motel tonight
We'll go hard, all night, gonna be loud
Oh baby, it's just a one night stand
 
You sit at the bar, order a beer
Searching for new meat
To make yourself disappear
 
You turn down everyone
Who comes your way
I know who you want
I know what you want
Cause I've been watching you
Watching me from the corner of your eye
 
It's just for one night, let's do it right
Let's make it unforgettable and let's
Lose ourselves to the feel of skin on skin tonight
 
 
It's a carefree action, no strings attached
Just you and me in a motel tonight
We'll go hard, all night, gonna be loud
Oh baby, it's just a one night stand
 
Baby, it's just a one night stand
 
 
 



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Cat C
Jan 04 2013 11:22 AM
Love the feel of this! It's trashy, free & sexy. 1st verse is great, but my fave line is: "Lose ourselves to the feel of skin on skin tonight." Really good.
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TheJesusOfSuburbiaIsALie
Jan 04 2013 11:34 AM

Love the feel of this! It's trashy, free & sexy. 1st verse is great, but my fave line is: "Lose ourselves to the feel of skin on skin tonight." Really good.

Ok I'm having a moment cause you like my work and you're work is so amazing :runaround: it's like a honour!
Thank you so much! That's exactly the feeling I was trying to get across. I'm glad you enjoyed it :happy:
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Cat C
Jan 04 2013 11:47 AM
Ok I'm having a moment cause you like my work and you're work is so amazing :runaround: it's like a honour! Thank you so much! That's exactly the feeling I was trying to get across. I'm glad you enjoyed it :happy:

Haha don't be silly we're all at the same level here. :lol: Yeah, it's awesome. It shows talent how you were so successful with this considering it was an experiment.

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Maria Gloria
Jan 05 2013 02:14 AM

I love this! I think you got the message you wanted across perfectly.

 

My favourite line is "Lose ourselves to the feel of skin on skin tonight" too. Awesome!

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TheJesusOfSuburbiaIsALie
Jan 05 2013 06:00 AM
I love this! I think you got the message you wanted across perfectly.

 

My favourite line is "Lose ourselves to the feel of skin on skin tonight" too. Awesome!

:runaround: :runaround: Thank you so much Maria! I'm so glad you like it!!! :D

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