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Would You Read On?

Posted by Dirntbag , in Writing, Personal 05 February 2013 · 194 views

Beginning of the story in spoiler:
 
 
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Yeah, so basically I may attempt to write a novel and I'd appreciate it if you'd all give this a read and tell me if it's worth perusing. It's going to be about me discovering through old photographs who my father really is. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
 
I mean I may use this novel writing as a personal project topic. A personal project is basically this huge project at the end of a critical point in the IB education system. It's bigger than all the other exams you have done in the past and if you don't do well on it, then you can't get your IB middle years program diploma. I obviously need to be able to finish the novel if I use it for a personal project, though I may just write it for fun if you guys don't think this idea is worth perusing.
 
Thanks for reading!
 



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Erica Reject
Feb 05 2013 08:30 PM

it's too early to tell whether this will make a good novel. i think you should write some more and see how it goes before you make a decision whether to scrap this project or not. Despite a few awkward sounding sentences, the writing is good.
 

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Thank you for the feedback! I have about 5000 words written, I think I'm going to speak to my English teacher about it today.

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