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Bury your Memories (attempted poetry)

Posted by Dirntbag , 11 December 2012 · 174 views

The soft whoosh
from the caress of a stricken sea
'gainst the shore.
They only touch for a second,
but always come back for more.
In epic reunion of sand grains
and waves
And in the sound,
the cry of 1,000 lonely souls saved.
 
It's a source of curiosity
for some,
a love so abrupt,
with one lover chasing ascent
and the other;
everlong,
sloping up.
 
Never concrete,
ever changing,
eternally rearranging
I never want to
find the same beach
twice.
 
And I must say I never have,
and predict I never will.
That's why I bury my memories here,
sown with the salt and watered
with tears.
 
I've been doing it for fourteen odd years,
and not once have I left without a treasure.



Very interesting, I like it.  You know you are good writer, you don't have to call your poetry an  "attempt"

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Very interesting, I like it.  You know you are good writer, you don't have to call your poetry an  "attempt"

Thank you. I put 'attempted' since I've been taking more of an interesting English course lately and it's exposed me to more  advanced poetic forms. I'm stronger at short stories, so I'm still learning a lot about poetry.

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