Hey, you!

Hey, guys.. got my second song written and ready, it's a song about someone I strongly dislike, as you can probably tell, and though I haven't done a "finished" record, I thought I wanted to share this with you.. it's just like a demo version, but it's only guitars and I just quickly recorded and mixed it.. I haven't done vocals, but y'know.. I've done the guitars and vocals, so I thought I'd share it with you.. Here's the song, any feedback is appreciated
 
https://soundcloud.c...u-guitars-vocal
 
Lyrics:
 
Intro x2
 
Verse 1
Hey, you!
The dirtiest bastard of them all,
How!
Can anyone be as cruel as you?
 
Pre-chorus 1
And I don't know where to go
So I'm losing my control
 
Chorus 1
My life is a misery
And it's all because of you
You're too much, it's killing me
And I don't know what to do
 
Chorus 2
My life is a misery
And it's all because of you
You're too much, it's killing me
And I don't know what to do
 
Bridge x2
 
Solo x4
 
Pre-chorus
And I don't know where to go
So I'm losing my control
 
Chorus 3
My life is a misery
And it's all because of you
You're too much, it's killing me
And I don't know what to do
 
Chorus 4
My life is a misery
And it's all because of you
You're too much, it's killing me
And I don't know what to do