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Song writing while studying.

Posted by Ritz , 05 December 2012 · 351 views

This is weird, but whenever I sit to study for my exams, I end up writing a song. This happened to me on Monday morning when I woke up a little early to study and I ended up playing with some lines in my head and when I penned them down on the paper, it turned out to be a full-fledged song. Well, whatever it is, its good :P
I haven't really decided on a title, but your suggestions are welcomed! Thanks.



-----------VERSE------------

I just wanna scream
Never wanna dream

Take the pain away
Before I decay

Cos its wearing out
Me inside out

I really don't know
What made you go away..


----------CHORUS------------

This life
Never gave me anything
This knife
Will cut through (oh) anything
This pain
Will never really fade away
This rain
Will never stop falling from my eyes


----------VERSE--------------

I just wanna cry
But my eyes are dry

I just wanna run
And never return

To the fucked up place
Where people judge by face

I am running out of time
And I wanna leave all of this behind me..


I have also figured out everything about this song, the melody and the tempo and stuff. Maybe me and my friend will record it after our exams. Thanks for reading and please make sure you give your precious feedback and comments on this.

Thanks! :)

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ConfirmPassword
Dec 05 2012 10:26 AM
Ahh it's good :D Awesome and simple!
Please record it soon!
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I love this!! I can't wait to hear it with music! :happy:
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Ahh it's good http://www.greendaycommunity.org/public/... Awesome and simple!
Please record it soon!


Thank you, I will make sure its recorded soon! :D
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I love this!! I can't wait to hear it with music! http://www.greendaycommunity.org/public/...


Thanks! :)
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TheJesusOfSuburbiaIsALie
Dec 06 2012 04:36 AM
I like it! I would absolutely love to hear it with music! :D
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I like it! I would absolutely love to hear it with music! http://www.greendaycommunity.org/public/...

Thanks!
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Maria Gloria
Dec 11 2012 02:39 PM

I love this, you have some great lines in there!

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I love this, you have some great lines in there!

Thanks!

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