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Story of the Year: #11 - Dead & Buried

Posted by Nzap , 24 February 2013 · 127 views

The 11th song in the 30 song journey trough a civil war for Jennifer and Benjamin. Here Jennifer is saying how this has changed her and Benjamin giving her advice on how to look at oneself and life in general.
 
11. Dead & Buried
 
J: Have you ever had the thought, what you believe in is wrong
That what you've always believed in isn't really true
Doesn't that change you, when you don't know where you belong
Cause now I have no idea of anything, haven't got a clue
 
I lost my faith and what I believed in when I was being betrayed
Now in this large world my head spins around, I'm confused
I don't know if in this you can at all begin to relate
Or am I just going crazy here with all the new big news?
 
B: Why do you insist on digging up stuff that happened in the past?
You can't change them anymore let go of them please, I ask
 
Why can't you face the simple facts
You are what you are, don't try to act
So go and find you're true "inner me"
Before it will be all gone, dead & buried
 
J: Have you ever had the thought what you believe in isn't really right
That what you've always believed in turns out to be false
Doesn't that change you, can even happen overnight
And your entire vision on life it might start to divulse
 
B: Why do you insist on digging up stuff that happened in the past?
You can't change them anymore let go of them please, I ask
 
Why can't you face the simple facts
You are what you are, don't try to act
So go and find you're true "inner me"
Before it will be all gone, dead & buried
 
You rejected your true premise
For a crazy new one of yours
And now you don't know what you believe in anymore
 
I'll soon tell you the truth in this
But first throw your thoughts into an abyss
And go out there, find your true "inner me"
Before you'll go crazy and become dead & buried
 
I'd really appreciate any comments on the songs. Even if you think they suck I'd like some kind of comment. I wanted to put these here and show them to you so that I could find comments on how to improve my songwriting and see if these are any good.



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