This is just a piece that's short and sweet. It's the first piece of writing I've done directly about the girl who I've been seeing. I don't need to explain about our situation, it's all in these 16 lines. I'm happy with this though, in preparation for starting work on the next part of my epic, I've been practicing summing up entire scenarios, people and feelings in a condensed format that can be expanded while remaining poetic. These two verses may well become part of the epic further down the line. For now though, they are Fire:
Fire
She set ablaze before my eyes
From the ends her fingertips
All for just a touch of the lies
That quiver, sad, behind my lips;
Scared of what it seems may well be
The feeling of cold winter rain
When leaves blow down streets without me
Chasing at the hint she wants me
And yet although the fires glow,
The winds blow strong to the obscure;
She’s never one to let me know
For fear of losing her allure
So for days she will stay away
To keep me bursting at the seams
And straight caught blind, out in the rain
No, it will never be the same

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