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This started out life as the first half of it just being a poem, but when I showed my friend he told me he simply needed to make a song out of it. I had a melody for the chorus already, and set about putting it together and extending it into a full song. I'm really proud of these words, it's very honest, my friend said it felt repentant, almost confession...
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Comrade's Scribblings
Naked
We’ve got one thing going on our side
It's where we are this time of night
As she goes to take off her shoes
I’ve only got one thing on my mind
What she looks like
What she looks like
Well it’s only ten past two
And I can't remeber when I met her
She’s got a smell of rose perfume
I’ve only got...
We’ve got one thing going on our side
It's where we are this time of night
As she goes to take off her shoes
I’ve only got one thing on my mind
What she looks like
What she looks like
Well it’s only ten past two
And I can't remeber when I met her
She’s got a smell of rose perfume
I’ve only got...
To Who Want It All
I’m not so mindful; my head’s up in the clouds
And she’s so jealous of the girls I hang around
She’s too keen, she’s too fucking keen
The way she says she wants to get to know me
And I’m perfect, like I’m all she’s ever seen
But I seen it all before, it ain’t nothing more
Th...
I’m not so mindful; my head’s up in the clouds
And she’s so jealous of the girls I hang around
She’s too keen, she’s too fucking keen
The way she says she wants to get to know me
And I’m perfect, like I’m all she’s ever seen
But I seen it all before, it ain’t nothing more
Th...
A little while ago I found myself watching one of those late-night porn channels. One of the ones with the topless girls writing around in front of the camera at 11.30pm and occasionally talking to people who call in. It got me thinking. I couldn't help wondering what was going through her head and why she was doing it. What she thought of it all. Even mo...
Shamelessly cheeky, this one. Bit shameless full-stop. Pretty much speaks for itself. I had a blast writing this, let me know what you think. Cheers. 
Does It Make Me All Bad?
If you’re ever looking for me
You’ll find me drinking at the edge of the night
But I’m not scared, I’m as brave as can be
It...
Does It Make Me All Bad?
If you’re ever looking for me
You’ll find me drinking at the edge of the night
But I’m not scared, I’m as brave as can be
It...
This is a little love poem inspired by distance.
Saunter Hotel
There’s something of a saunter in your step
As you work through the ebbs and flows of time
Though the rose bushes are growing unkempt
You still look beautiful to me, well I’m
Taken in by your cheeky ’lil smile
And the glint in you...
Saunter Hotel
There’s something of a saunter in your step
As you work through the ebbs and flows of time
Though the rose bushes are growing unkempt
You still look beautiful to me, well I’m
Taken in by your cheeky ’lil smile
And the glint in you...
So after leaving Tracing Emotions alone for a while, I have come back and instead of getting to work on part two, I decided to get to work on the second draft of Discovery. I always planned to flesh it out from 60 stanzas to around 80, but once I started planning and getting my ideas down, I realised it would be a pretty extensive re-write that...
The City
I didn’t want to go on over,
'Cause I didn’t want to be her friend
Treading the fine line between lover
And knowing when we’ve reached a dead end
On a Tuesday night in the city
Normally I’d have slept on the floor
But passion like that feels too gritty
I’ve been there a dozen times before
Which meant I...
I didn’t want to go on over,
'Cause I didn’t want to be her friend
Treading the fine line between lover
And knowing when we’ve reached a dead end
On a Tuesday night in the city
Normally I’d have slept on the floor
But passion like that feels too gritty
I’ve been there a dozen times before
Which meant I...
Death of the Night
I check in at Clapham and then on to Hounslow
Drinking the difference between living and death row
After losing my place in the death of the night
And not feeling ashamed that I kissed her just twice
It was looking quite dodgy, some might say shady
Cause the girl I was with was not quite a lady
She insisted we started...
I check in at Clapham and then on to Hounslow
Drinking the difference between living and death row
After losing my place in the death of the night
And not feeling ashamed that I kissed her just twice
It was looking quite dodgy, some might say shady
Cause the girl I was with was not quite a lady
She insisted we started...
Rain
Tell me where you are, did you say you’re sorry yet?
For the first time that you self-consciously undressed
But then you just turned away without me seeing
A piece of you I wanted to feel with my lips,
If you only knew the heartbreak I made myself
Fall into, well what else was there for me to do
Alone after you left your scarf...
Tell me where you are, did you say you’re sorry yet?
For the first time that you self-consciously undressed
But then you just turned away without me seeing
A piece of you I wanted to feel with my lips,
If you only knew the heartbreak I made myself
Fall into, well what else was there for me to do
Alone after you left your scarf...
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